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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby jorgee » Fri Aug 03, 2012 3:04 am

YO! watsup everyone again i got a melodic track free to download hope people give feedback on some mistakes or maybe even spin it!

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby KodeAM » Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:09 am

jorgee wrote:YO! watsup everyone again i got a melodic track free to download hope people give feedback on some mistakes or maybe even spin it!



Wow I love you main sections specially with the drums on the second. Your breakdown/quiet section dont really make sence to me and you should use more fx (crashes,slides,etc). Other then that, just watch your project for your silent (long!) zone at the end lol but really nice work with the melody and bass sync. cheers
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby KodeAM » Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:31 am

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Mick wrote:Hello music makers. This is the 1st track I have posted in a month! My work flow is awful and Ibiza had killed me off. Anyway I seen on the forum somewhere that a good way to get exposure is by making bootlegs of songs that are in the charts so I checked out the billboard 200 and I noticed that gotye's somebody I used to know is still big so I thought I would try an make it danceable. Be great for some feedback thanks. Gotye - Somebody That I Use To Know (Mick Harrison Bootleg)


Story mick ya bootlegs will boost the sound cloud stats no end! good effert on this one Im not gone on the drop at 2.39 it feels like its lacking some punch and there is too much pump from that sidechain Id tone back the release on it a bit and the threshold. Id aslo pitch up the looped vocal in the build. The second part is better its still lacking punch and way too much SC but its a lot more interesting to listen to.


Hey! In this you stick up too much with the original track, wich for me is a mistake. Trying to make a club track based on a quiet song's arrangement. You should cut the original track and stay with the parts that really matter (ex. hook). This lacks power and the drop isnt good enough(too basic and not energetic). I think you should work on your arrangement, make it club friendly, with main sections and climax sections. Plus @2.55 looks like you decided to sidechain your master bus lol. sidechain has to be present ALWAYS and not with all this pump, find the balance so it keep your sounds away from interfiring with your kick. Its just cus' when you "drop" @2.40 and @5.19 the sidechain its obviouly NOT ON, you dont hear it working if you listen to the bassline.Sidechain must be on Always, at least when you have kick on so it dont strugles with other sounds. Remember to work on your eq too. Cheers
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Pink Audio » Fri Aug 03, 2012 4:41 am

Pink Audio wrote:HEY GUYS! TRIED SOMETHING NEW HERE! AND WOULD LOVE SOME FEEDBACK! STILL WORKING ON IT THO! SO WOULD LIKE TO HEAR BACK FROM YOU GUYS! AND I'LL DEFF RETURN THE FAVOR :) CHEERS!



anyone? no? ok ;/ lol
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby avian » Fri Aug 03, 2012 6:44 am

Pink Audio wrote:
Pink Audio wrote:HEY GUYS! TRIED SOMETHING NEW HERE! AND WOULD LOVE SOME FEEDBACK! STILL WORKING ON IT THO! SO WOULD LIKE TO HEAR BACK FROM YOU GUYS! AND I'LL DEFF RETURN THE FAVOR :) CHEERS!



anyone? no? ok ;/ lol



good drums....not my style though but good job keep it up
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby silentONE » Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:51 am

Just finished this about an hour ago. Let me know what you think and any tips, etc. Thanks!

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Alean » Fri Aug 03, 2012 9:55 am

Any feedbacks for my first track

Alean - Luners (Original Mix)

Thanks , Alean
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Mick » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:17 am

Sexton wrote:
Mick wrote:Hello music makers. This is the 1st track I have posted in a month! My work flow is awful and Ibiza had killed me off. Anyway I seen on the forum somewhere that a good way to get exposure is by making bootlegs of songs that are in the charts so I checked out the billboard 200 and I noticed that gotye's somebody I used to know is still big so I thought I would try an make it danceable. Be great for some feedback thanks. Gotye - Somebody That I Use To Know (Mick Harrison Bootleg)


Story mick ya bootlegs will boost the sound cloud stats no end! good effert on this one Im not gone on the drop at 2.39 it feels like its lacking some punch and there is too much pump from that sidechain Id tone back the release on it a bit and the threshold. Id aslo pitch up the looped vocal in the build. The second part is better its still lacking punch and way too much SC but its a lot more interesting to listen to.


Thank you for giving me feedback. I think I'll add a white noise on my dropp or something. Are you refering to my sc on the bass?
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Pink Audio » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:34 am

avian wrote:
Pink Audio wrote:
Pink Audio wrote:HEY GUYS! TRIED SOMETHING NEW HERE! AND WOULD LOVE SOME FEEDBACK! STILL WORKING ON IT THO! SO WOULD LIKE TO HEAR BACK FROM YOU GUYS! AND I'LL DEFF RETURN THE FAVOR :) CHEERS!



anyone? no? ok ;/ lol



good drums....not my style though but good job keep it up


thanks you very appreciated :)
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Pink Audio » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:44 am

Mick wrote:
Sexton wrote:
Mick wrote:Hello music makers. This is the 1st track I have posted in a month! My work flow is awful and Ibiza had killed me off. Anyway I seen on the forum somewhere that a good way to get exposure is by making bootlegs of songs that are in the charts so I checked out the billboard 200 and I noticed that gotye's somebody I used to know is still big so I thought I would try an make it danceable. Be great for some feedback thanks. Gotye - Somebody That I Use To Know (Mick Harrison Bootleg)


Story mick ya bootlegs will boost the sound cloud stats no end! good effert on this one Im not gone on the drop at 2.39 it feels like its lacking some punch and there is too much pump from that sidechain Id tone back the release on it a bit and the threshold. Id aslo pitch up the looped vocal in the build. The second part is better its still lacking punch and way too much SC but its a lot more interesting to listen to.


Thank you for giving me feedback. I think I'll add a white noise on my dropp or something. Are you refering to my sc on the bass?


I MEAN NO DISRESPECT OR RUDENESS FOR WHAT I WRITE :)
is this supposed to be a calm soothing laidback track? if yes than id keep it at how it is. but if it is not i would add some more excitement to it. good over all production and yes the white noise will deff help! and idk if its just my ears or of anyone else notices this but during the build i believe you can add more elements and excitement too it, it seems too plain and simple.. the second buildup is a little better tho :) again noo rudeness or disrespect intended :) cheers!
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Alean » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:50 am

I like the drums :)
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View and answer me please

Postby Abdel » Fri Aug 03, 2012 10:56 am

Hey, I am a beginner in this domain, and i want to know if my two first remix are right or bad :)

This is the first http://soundcloud.com/ivan-abdel/the-first-remix-ivan-abdel

the second http://soundcloud.com/ivan-abdel/summer-mix-2012-ivan-abdel

it will give me great pleasure if you listen to them and give me your opinion :)

Thanks :o
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby FranGoodwin » Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:00 pm

Would love some feedback on my take of avicii - superlove! thanks :)

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby AttackAttackAttack » Fri Aug 03, 2012 2:46 pm

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O4r8mVITnDc

After remixing Steve Aoki and Angger Dimas, here's my first original release, what do you guys think?!?!
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