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ktothe wrote:Check out my new track, if you leave feedback I'd be happy to return the favor! Thanks!
BWen wrote:ktothe wrote:Check out my new track, if you leave feedback I'd be happy to return the favor! Thanks!
Good stuff man, the main thing that stood out to me was your drums/rhythm stuff... It doesnt quite "groove'' enough... Like the intro and the little percussion pattern that plays throughout is to mechanical sounding.. Id try maybe adding some swing quantize to the pattern... maybe experiment with moving things forward and back here and there... Or some sidechaining... fool around with the compressor thats sidechaining (attack and release settings) and that can make it groove some as well.. I Think those things should help the drums groove a bit better!
Also some of your hats are a bit harsh in places... sometimes you gotta find those harsh frequencies in those cymbals...
I like the track though, bassline in the drop is tough..
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BWen wrote:ktothe wrote:Check out my new track, if you leave feedback I'd be happy to return the favor! Thanks!
Good stuff man, the main thing that stood out to me was your drums/rhythm stuff... It doesnt quite "groove'' enough... Like the intro and the little percussion pattern that plays throughout is to mechanical sounding.. Id try maybe adding some swing quantize to the pattern... maybe experiment with moving things forward and back here and there... Or some sidechaining... fool around with the compressor thats sidechaining (attack and release settings) and that can make it groove some as well.. I Think those things should help the drums groove a bit better!
Also some of your hats are a bit harsh in places... sometimes you gotta find those harsh frequencies in those cymbals...
I like the track though, bassline in the drop is tough..
YAU! wrote:BWen wrote:ktothe wrote:Check out my new track, if you leave feedback I'd be happy to return the favor! Thanks!
Good stuff man, the main thing that stood out to me was your drums/rhythm stuff... It doesnt quite "groove'' enough... Like the intro and the little percussion pattern that plays throughout is to mechanical sounding.. Id try maybe adding some swing quantize to the pattern... maybe experiment with moving things forward and back here and there... Or some sidechaining... fool around with the compressor thats sidechaining (attack and release settings) and that can make it groove some as well.. I Think those things should help the drums groove a bit better!
Also some of your hats are a bit harsh in places... sometimes you gotta find those harsh frequencies in those cymbals...
I like the track though, bassline in the drop is tough..
i agree with this guy... bassline is pretty cool! It adds a lot of body to it.
But i would try a bit harder on that melody next time! I think it kind of cut the feeling... not sure if i'm being clear
BWen wrote:Heres my remix of "Chasin"... I think I need more compression in spots so its not done, but fedback is encouraged!
Thanks guys
ktothe wrote:YAU! wrote:BWen wrote:ktothe wrote:Check out my new track, if you leave feedback I'd be happy to return the favor! Thanks!
Good stuff man, the main thing that stood out to me was your drums/rhythm stuff... It doesnt quite "groove'' enough... Like the intro and the little percussion pattern that plays throughout is to mechanical sounding.. Id try maybe adding some swing quantize to the pattern... maybe experiment with moving things forward and back here and there... Or some sidechaining... fool around with the compressor thats sidechaining (attack and release settings) and that can make it groove some as well.. I Think those things should help the drums groove a bit better!
Also some of your hats are a bit harsh in places... sometimes you gotta find those harsh frequencies in those cymbals...
I like the track though, bassline in the drop is tough..
i agree with this guy... bassline is pretty cool! It adds a lot of body to it.
But i would try a bit harder on that melody next time! I think it kind of cut the feeling... not sure if i'm being clear
Thanks! Are you talking about the synth melody or the piano melody?
I'm digging your track "Primero"! The drop gets me pumped, and I love the variation at the end around 5:40. The only thing I would change is the kick drum, I feel like it's not coming through the mix as much as it should be. Really great job though, keep it up!
Konee wrote:Hi there
my new track:
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PretzelBender wrote:Konee wrote:Hi there
my new track:
thanks for any feedback!
This is great. I feel like we've got the new Hardwell here!Very professional, great drums in the intro, the melody is very cool, very refreshing, and the piano fits right with the trancer synth. Sorry if I haven't got much criticism on this, you should just keep on producing, I'm sure you'll get quickly signed on a big label, if that's what you want.
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