You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby DDeixP » Sat May 05, 2012 7:30 pm

We tried to remix ATC's Around The World, this is the result. What do you think about it?



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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby jelleberg » Sat May 05, 2012 8:56 pm

I produce for a year now
what do you guys think? is it any good for a beginner? any things i should improve?
"don't try to make music if you're not enjoying it"

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby jelleberg » Sat May 05, 2012 9:18 pm

Exley wrote:This is my first track, i started producing more serious about 3-4 months ago (unfortunately, i don't have much free time to fully dedicate it to producing) i know i have much much to learn yet, but i really need some advice of people who are better than me. So, i met this guy who owns a label (small label, but gets regulary support from artists like Roger Sanchez, D.O.N.S., Mark Knight and other top producers), and he said to me that overall production is good, but that track lacks that "something", some elements, (not to be mistaken, im aware of that), but simply can't figure it out what are they. So please, give me some advice/feedback what can i add to make it sound better. Thanks in advance!



you should put a stereo on some of the synths, and maybe a bit more variety in the melody.
otherwise, a good track!
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Pink Audio » Sun May 06, 2012 5:40 am

WHATS UP GUYS! NEW TRACK! WELCOMED TO ANY HELP, CRITICISM OR JUST FRIENDLY FEEDBACK! :)

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Exley » Sun May 06, 2012 8:32 am

jelleberg wrote:
Exley wrote:This is my first track, i started producing more serious about 3-4 months ago (unfortunately, i don't have much free time to fully dedicate it to producing) i know i have much much to learn yet, but i really need some advice of people who are better than me. So, i met this guy who owns a label (small label, but gets regulary support from artists like Roger Sanchez, D.O.N.S., Mark Knight and other top producers), and he said to me that overall production is good, but that track lacks that "something", some elements, (not to be mistaken, im aware of that), but simply can't figure it out what are they. So please, give me some advice/feedback what can i add to make it sound better. Thanks in advance!



you should put a stereo on some of the synths, and maybe a bit more variety in the melody.
otherwise, a good track!


thanks a lot for listening and feedback, really appreciate that, but im not sure what do you mean by "stereo" ?
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Tetra » Sun May 06, 2012 11:40 am

Synaudic wrote:Hi guys, need critics on a track. What would u guys add/change? Would u play this out? How's the quality mixing-wise etc?
Any input is highly appreciated!


nicely produced! the sounds fit well together.. I'm not too excited bout the melody though, compliments none the less.

jelleberg wrote:I produce for a year now
what do you guys think? is it any good for a beginner? any things i should improve?

i think it may be good for you to get one of your favorite tracks into your project, then try to remake that tracks break/drop with all the effects and stuff. Cause I hear there's almost no effects going on, and as everyone knows; effects are a MUST when it comes to making your track drop well.
Also, what's on your master? It sounds way overcompressed.

Exley wrote:
jelleberg wrote:
Exley wrote:This is my first track, i started producing more serious about 3-4 months ago (unfortunately, i don't have much free time to fully dedicate it to producing) i know i have much much to learn yet, but i really need some advice of people who are better than me. So, i met this guy who owns a label (small label, but gets regulary support from artists like Roger Sanchez, D.O.N.S., Mark Knight and other top producers), and he said to me that overall production is good, but that track lacks that "something", some elements, (not to be mistaken, im aware of that), but simply can't figure it out what are they. So please, give me some advice/feedback what can i add to make it sound better. Thanks in advance!



you should put a stereo on some of the synths, and maybe a bit more variety in the melody.
otherwise, a good track!


thanks a lot for listening and feedback, really appreciate that, but im not sure what do you mean by "stereo" ?


Decent track indeed! And what he means is that your synths sound a little bit narrow. You should widen them up with a Stereo enhancer/izotope Ozone or something similiar.
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby SimonSky » Sun May 06, 2012 2:33 pm

Hey guys,

here is a booty of Deniz Koyus Tung! Maybe you like it :wink:

Deniz Koyu - Tung! (Simon Sky Bootleg)

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby alexflood » Sun May 06, 2012 3:18 pm

Hey Guys,

This is a bootleg of my favorite Daft Punk tracks with a sexy twist. Hope you like it. As always, any comments/feedback would be great.




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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Allic » Sun May 06, 2012 3:49 pm

Hi folks!
I made this track called Shortcuts, let me know if you like it!

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Gruneau » Sun May 06, 2012 5:10 pm

Hi guys!

Here is a preview of my first upcomming release! I would love to hear what you guys think!




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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Exley » Sun May 06, 2012 5:15 pm

@Tetra

Thanks for answering.
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby owenjenks1 » Sun May 06, 2012 8:35 pm

Hey guys.

My first Record signing and first release on VOLT9 Records.

Here it is on souncloud:



And here it is on Juno download :

http://www.junodownload.com/products/saani/1958063-02/

Its out on the 24th May 2012 on all downloadable music sites, including Beatport.

Take a listen and give me as much support that i will need.

Many thanks,

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Skiman » Mon May 07, 2012 1:24 am

Hello LBL Forum

A little demo Id like some feedback on if anyone has a spare few minutes?!?!? Pretty Please?!?!?

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