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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby FranGoodwin » Tue Jul 24, 2012 3:26 pm

Hey guys, would love some feedback on my latest production "she comes alive"

guess the vocal sample ;)

Fran Goodwin - She Comes Alive (Original Mix)
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby tanapfen » Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:42 pm

Pink Audio wrote:HELLO GUYS NEW TRACK! WOULD LOVE TO HEAR FROM YOU GUYS! :) ANY TYPE OF CRITICISM IS WELCOMED :) DON'T HOLD BACK!!




I don't often say this but I think your kick is a tad too powerful in the mix, and it's in my opinion just literally killing eveything in the track, at the same time your synths seem a bit thin, try some layering, and don't forget teh power of distootion .. but you have a pretty nice wide mix... decent track though,
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby tanapfen » Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:44 pm

FranGoodwin wrote:Hey guys, would love some feedback on my latest production "she comes alive"

guess the vocal sample ;)

Fran Goodwin - She Comes Alive (Original Mix)


Sounds like a good track the mix is a bit cluttered, some eq may help with that , also remember panning and reverb can help you place instuments in the mix... but yeah keep at it man
I made a pack of 15 kicks download it for free http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?73asn1pmt2nl81h
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby tanapfen » Tue Jul 24, 2012 4:45 pm

Hey Guys

I am in the process of making a track and now I think that maybe the break and the drop don't gel so well, so i though I'd ask some impartial parties a.k.a you ...

I made a pack of 15 kicks download it for free http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?73asn1pmt2nl81h
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby BWen » Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:27 pm

PretzelBender wrote:
Konee wrote:Hi there
my new track:

thanks for any feedback!


This is great. I feel like we've got the new Hardwell here!Very professional, great drums in the intro, the melody is very cool, very refreshing, and the piano fits right with the trancer synth. Sorry if I haven't got much criticism on this, you should just keep on producing, I'm sure you'll get quickly signed on a big label, if that's what you want.


Brilliant! The only thing I could hear (and im knit-picking) was at about 4:00 the change is to abrupt.. There may need to be an impact or effect there at 4:01... Like I said brilliant and my feedback is a stretch lol overall very solid Tune!!!
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby Konee » Tue Jul 24, 2012 5:57 pm

BWen wrote:
PretzelBender wrote:
Konee wrote:Hi there
my new track:

thanks for any feedback!


This is great. I feel like we've got the new Hardwell here!Very professional, great drums in the intro, the melody is very cool, very refreshing, and the piano fits right with the trancer synth. Sorry if I haven't got much criticism on this, you should just keep on producing, I'm sure you'll get quickly signed on a big label, if that's what you want.


Brilliant! The only thing I could hear (and im knit-picking) was at about 4:00 the change is to abrupt.. There may need to be an impact or effect there at 4:01... Like I said brilliant and my feedback is a stretch lol overall very solid Tune!!!

Thank you too, at 4:01 i put a downfilter and a lazer thing too, but maybe need an impact or crash. I'll check this :)
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby GentryJones » Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:09 pm

GENERATION - GENTRY JONES
banger for 2012! enjoy!
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby PretzelBender » Tue Jul 24, 2012 7:13 pm

tanapfen wrote:Hey Guys

I am in the process of making a track and now I think that maybe the break and the drop don't gel so well, so i though I'd ask some impartial parties a.k.a you ...



Actually, I feel like the break and the drop are getting pretty well with each other, man. It could more, but it's fine this way. Maybe shortening the notes of the bass at the drop would make it work better, giving a Zedd kind of feel, but otherwise, I'm really digging it very cool! :D
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby gritzildino » Tue Jul 24, 2012 8:32 pm

Hey!!! Check out me and my boy Party Arty's Bootleg of Kendo: :D :D :D
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby dmcstyle » Tue Jul 24, 2012 10:52 pm

heres my new single

feedback would be very appreciated! ;)

DMC Style - Come With You
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby ryanmiskimmin » Tue Jul 24, 2012 11:11 pm

Hey Guys....

My new track... See what you think... Any feedback, advice etc is always welcomed...

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby DeOro » Wed Jul 25, 2012 1:56 am

What's up everyone!! Been working on tons of music lately!! Gave out this bootleg I made of Eminem-Without Me' & my latest remix for an upcoming artist "Basspowers"! Feedback is highly appreciated as always!!! :D :D

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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby DeOro » Wed Jul 25, 2012 1:57 am

gritzildino wrote:Hey!!! Check out me and my boy Party Arty's Bootleg of Kendo: :D :D :D

This is banging man if you guys made that drop it's AWESOME!! Keep up the great work!
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby DeOro » Wed Jul 25, 2012 2:00 am

dmcstyle wrote:heres my new single

feedback would be very appreciated! ;)

DMC Style - Come With You

Mastering on this is top notch!! It has a great commercial vibe to it without sounding like everything else out there,& also very well composed!!!!
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Re: You can post your own selfmade pieces of music here

Postby henrydoce » Wed Jul 25, 2012 4:28 am

Hey guys! Need some opinions on a remix of Love Letters - Clinton Van Sciver & Swedish Egil. I reeeeeaalllly could use some constructive criticism and I'll be more than happy to return the favor :)

http://www56.zippyshare.com/v/54814634/file.html

Thanks dudes!
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